Here are Summer's instructions on how she made her parachute. Are the instructions clear? Has she included bossy verbs? Are her sentences direct and to the point? Would you get muddled if you followed her instructions?
How to make a parachute?
How to make a parachute?
What you need
-Plastic sheet.
-Tape.
-String.
-Cork.
-Scissors.
-Vivid.
Instructions
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1. Grab your plastic sheet.
2. Cut your plastic sheet into a square.
3. Grab four pieces of string.
4. Cut your string into four medium strings.
5. Cut four holes in the end of your square.
6. Insert your string into the holes.
7. Tie the string together.
8. Attach the cork to the string.
9. Finally go outside and see if it lands softly, if not make improvements.
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10. Once done put detailed designs on it!
By Summer! :D